My 4-Year Old’s First Short Story

In keeping with a promise I made if he sat and completed a story, I present to you, The Attack of Finley, by Dempsey McGevna…

 

Matthew, Joanne, Jackson and Dempsey were sitting home one day when the big baby Finley attacked the world.

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Dempsey grabbed a gun and tried to shoot her, but she was too invincible. Finley grabbed the gun and shot Dempsey and Jackson but they were invincible too. So the Finleynators grabbed a thing that circles around, so we ran out the door and there was a parkour, so we could run out and parkour our way out.

The End.

 

2 thoughts on “My 4-Year Old’s First Short Story

  1. The suspense the author builds had me on the edge of my seat. The ending left me hoping for a sequel. A fantastically successful first work. Will keep my eye out for more work by this new author.
    -J.Cella of Tales of the City Magazine

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